> What are you trying to say here?

That various facts from the paragraph in question require being sorted out — in order to make them understandable for everybody.

> What are you trying to say here?

That various facts from the paragraph in question require being sorted out — in order to make them understandable for everybody.

> Piece could use some proofreading.

Sure. My English is far from perfect, and this is just a ‘quick and dirty’ write-up.